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Citaat:

though we where friends
trough good and bad times
never give up each other
never let each other down

something changed
I still don't know what
But whatever it was
it
broke?? our friendschip

I'm still searching for a reason
why I growed away from you
maybe because the time
we've been together was too long

somebody once said
'nothing is for ever'
I didn't believe it,
but you proved it...

I schould be thankful
for what you've learned me
'cause life is the worst teacher
it gives the test before the lesson.

so I'll say
right now!
thank you for the things you teached me
and thank you for our time together.

Eve_lien schreef:

Citaat:

though thought (?)we where were friends
trough good and bad times
never give gaveup each other
never let each other down

something changed
I still don't know what
But whatever it was
it
broke?? our friendschip

I'm still searching for a reason
why I growedgrew away from you
maybe because the time
we've been together was too long

somebody once said Once somebody said
'nothing is lasts (is denk ik mooier) for ever'
I didn't believe it,
but you proved it...

I schould be thankful
for what you've learned me
'cause life is the worst teacher
it gives the test before the lesson.

so I'll say
right now!
thank you for the things you teached me
and thank you for our time together.

lolletje schreef:

sorry hoor maar too is: ook en to is: te dus ze had dat wel goed geschreven

pharagirlke schreef:

iemand zei 2 jaar geleden tegen me dat niets voor eeuwig duurt, tging toen over vriendschap, ik geloofde dat niet en ging er tegen in. Ondertusse heeft degene waar het toen over ging het bewezen dat die wat t zei gelijk had. Daarom dit gedicht. Er zitten alleen zoooooooooveel fouten in


though we
were
friends

through good and bad times mooier zou ik vinden: through the good times and the bad
never giving up on each other als dit slaat op de vorige zin over door goede en slechte tijden is het never giving up on, als het los daarvan staat en tegenwoorde tijd is, stond het goed.
never letting each other down idem als hierboven

something changed
I still don't know what
But whatever it was
it broke our friendship

still I'm searching for a reason still heb je bij vorige stukje ook al gebruikt, misschien weglaten?
why I we? grew away apart? from you each other?
maybe because the time
we've been together was for too long

somebody once said
'nothing is of lasts? forever'
I didn't believe it, of didn't want to believe it?[i]
but you proved it [i]right...

I should be thankful
for what you've taught me learned doe jij, teached/taught doet een ander jou.
'cause life is the worst teacher misschien 'there is' erachteraan?
it gives the test before the lesson.

so I'll say
right now!
thank you for the things you teached me
and thank you for our time together.[/i]