[Verhaal] Fallen Knight

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Yasmine

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[Verhaal] Fallen Knight

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Introduction

After the fifteen years of rough battles in order of Rome, only seven of the twenty-four knights remained: Arthur, Lancelot, Tristan, Galahad, Gawain, Bors and Dagonet. Together, they would receive the freedom for which they had fought fifteen years. But on the evening they would receive their papers that would give them their freedom back, the bishop of Rome gave them a last task. During the task, one of the men died. So they got back to the bishop with only six of them, but they got their papers and were free.
But Arthur stayed behind; he would fight the Saxons, an extraordinary cruel people.
One knight against 200 cruel Saxons, it sounded impossible, but what the Saxons didn’t know, was that that one knight was Artorius, commander of the Sarmation knights.
And once again, the six Sarmation knights joined and together they fought the Saxons. Although they had fought many battles, this battle was different.
It wasn’t the first time that Arthur and his knights had to fight a rough battle, but the last battle they fought was everything except normal.
First of all, they had fought in free will, as they were free men.
Second, they lost two of their brave knights: Tristan and Lancelot. In the fifteen years the knights had spent together, they lost many friends, but the loss of Lancelot and Tristan was different, very different.

This is the story about one of the six great Sarmation knights, who died in their last battle. A story about bravery and friendship, a story about Tristan.




Dit is de inleiding van mijn verhaal, dat gebaseerd is op de film 'King Arthur' Lachen
Ja, de uploadsite heeft mijn randje lang één kant eraf gekapt Clown
Laatst bijgewerkt door Yasmine op 30-01-05 19:32, in het totaal 1 keer bewerkt

Leo

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 19:31

Zoals ik al zei: Goedgekeurd Haha!

Ga zo door Ja

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 19:37

Ben benieuwd wat het vervolg gaat worden... Knipoog

Spirit

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 19:48

Leuk Haha!

Ben benieuwd wat voor een verhaal het gaat worden!

Komt gelijk weer zo'n geweldige uitspraak uit de film in me boven: "There is a legend that fallen knights return as great horses." Lovers

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 20:50

Spirit schreef:
Leuk Haha!

Ben benieuwd wat voor een verhaal het gaat worden!

Komt gelijk weer zo'n geweldige uitspraak uit de film in me boven: "There is a legend that fallen knights return as great horses." Lovers



Jah! Ik heb laatst de dvd gezien, geweldig!! Lovers (die spreuk) maar de film ook *LOL*

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 21:22

Mooi gedaan hoor Haha!

Dat plaatje vind ik mooi, Ja
Tja Rolleyes , ik vind dat soort plaatjes altijd mooi Tong uitsteken

Ben benieuwd naar het vervolg

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 30-01-05 21:38

Spirit schreef:
Komt gelijk weer zo'n geweldige uitspraak uit de film in me boven: "There is a legend that fallen knights return as great horses." Lovers

Jaaaaa, die is zo mooi! Lovers
En op het einde zie je dan die 3 paarden van Dagonet, Tristan en Lancelot.

Bedankt allemaal Lachen

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Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 30-01-05 22:52

Mientjeuh schreef:
Jaaaaa, die is zo mooi! Lovers
En op het einde zie je dan die 3 paarden van Dagonet, Tristan en Lancelot.

Ja echt super Haha!

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 31-01-05 20:43

mooi geschreven
ik wil meer Ja

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 01-02-05 20:24

U vraagt, wij draaien Knipoog
(Het stuk is nog niet af!)

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Another normal morning in a peaceful village in South-Britain. At the banks of the river, women were washing clothes. Children were playing on the many fields of grass, helping their parents or herding the sheep.
But there was one boy who wasn’t playing, helping of herding. He sat in a tree and was watching the birds. His name was Tristan.
Some of the inhabitants of the village thought he was a bit odd, because he was often wandering around alone in the woods. But except from that, he was as normal as any other fifteen-year-old boy in his village.
But the peaceful village wasn’t as peaceful as it seemed at first sight. One of these days, a group of Roman knights would arrive.
Hundred years ago, an extremely bloody battle was fought in Sarmatia. At the end of it, after four days, the only men alive were the Sarmatian knights. The roman knights spared their lives, but instead they wanted that every year, all the sons and grandsons of those Sarmatian knight, to fight in order of Rome for fifteen years long. One of those sons was Tristan, whose great- great- great-grandfather’s life had been spared in Sarmatia.
Tristan knew that not many of those men returned, but he was sure that he would return. Actually, he was looking a bit forward to it. The tactics of fighting he would learn, the battles he would fight, and it sounded all very exciting to him. He always dreamed of becoming a great knight, whose name would only be whispered and would make people shiver when hearing it.

He spent the whole day wandering along in the forest, which ways he all knew. When the sun sunk back into its shell of mountains, he went back to the village. The sound of laughing people and music reached the edge of the forest. Tristan stopped. How could he forget? Today it was Aislin’s 57th birthday; which was very old for a Sarmatian man.
He ran to his hut, washed his hand and face, put on a clean robe and went back outside. Immediately the smell of delicious food overwhelmed him. A hand grabbed his shoulder and Tristan turned around. In front of him stood Cristan, his best friend.
“Cristan, my friend! How are you?” Tristan said with a broad smile.
“Good, good! And how are you? Been wandering around a lot?”
“Yeah, you know what I always say: wandering is …”
“your middle name? You got to be more original, mate!” laughed Cristan.
They moved on towards the big fire in the center of the crowd. There, the best cookers of the village prepared excellent dishes of food. Tristan grabbed a large piece of chicken breast and put it in his mouth at once.
Again, a hand grabbed his shoulder and when he turned around, Tristan was facing Lily.
Lily was a pretty fourteen-year-old girl, with long, shiny, brown hair. Her green eyes sparkled with pleasure when she talked to Tristan.
“Come on, let’s dance!” she said joyfully.
Tristan looked in her eyes and said: “Well, I guess I haven’t got any choice?”
He took her hand and together they went to the dancing crowd of people. Instantly, they were sucked into the crowd and they started to dance.

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 01-02-05 21:04

mooi mooi Ja
omg is nu nog meer in love op Tristan dan eerst Lovers

Yasmine

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 02-02-05 16:37

Ja, ik ook echt helemaal Lovers *LOL*

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 02-02-05 19:25

Goedzo Ja

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 02-02-05 22:41

Echt leuk Haha!
Ga zo door Clown

(maar ik vind nog steeds Lancelot het leukst Tong uitsteken)

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Nog een stukje Lachen

The next morning, Tristan woke up very early. Outside, he heard people talking. What’s happening?, he thought. Are they coming? He got up, undressed and put on clean clothes. Then he walked to the table that stood in the middle of the hut. He took a piece of bread, put it in his mouth and went outside.
People were chattering, clearly not bothering about the other people who were still sleeping. Tristan went to the nearest group of people.
“What’s happening?” he asked.
A short, rather fat, man answered: “A Roman messenger has just arrived, they are coming!”
So Tristan had thought right, they were coming. When he had heard all the stories of his father about Rome, it all sounded very exciting. But now, when he was really facing it, it all seemed much more dangerous and threatening than before.
Just when he was about to go and look for Cristian, Tristan’s mother came hurrying to her son. “My boy,” she said, “you’d better go back to the hut and pack! They’ll arrive in about an hour!” She looked frightened, but Tristan knew how excited his mother was. His parents always said fighting for Rome was an honour. Tristan’s father also had to fight for the Romans, he was now five years back in his village.
“Rough, that’s what it is like in Rome. That’s where you become a real man” he always said to his son.

Tristan did what his mother had told him and went back to the hut. When he was inside, he closed the door carefully. He didn’t want to be disturbed at this moment.

Spirit

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 10-02-05 19:33

Ik wacht nog op een vervolg Haha!

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 10-02-05 22:48

ik ook Ja
echt heel erg mooi,Tristan Lovers

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 10-02-05 23:01

Heel leuk! Meer meer meer Haha!

Citaat:
(maar ik vind nog steeds Lancelot het leukst )


Jaa, Lancje=lekker Lovers Die krulletjes doen 't 'm denk ik Knipoog

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 11-02-05 10:04

Mooi gedaan zeg! OK dan!
Ik ben ook nogal een fan van de Arthur legende, maar ik vond het verhaal van de film echt waardeloos Bloos Haha! Doe mij het orgineel maar!

Yasmine

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 11-02-05 19:27

Woops, ik wist helemaal niet dat dit topic terug omhoog geschopt was Clown
Ik zal wat verderschrijven Cool

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 12-02-05 17:35

Mientjeuh schreef:
Woops, ik wist helemaal niet dat dit topic terug omhoog geschopt was Clown
Ik zal wat verderschrijven Cool

Jaaaaaaaaa Lachen

*Benieuwd is

Leo

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Re: [Verhaal] Fallen Knight

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 13-02-05 15:29

Nou Mien ik heb 'm gezien hoor Lovers