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Renee_vd schreef:Every time i wake up
I feel such pain
I don't want to wake up
Please let me sleep
My heart is disorded
It skip all the time
I'm confused
I don't want this
All the things i love
Every one i love Everyone is gewoon een woord volgens mij
away,...
and never turnt back turned
First i felt so deep
But i climb and climb Dit klopt niet, moet verleden tijd zijn en dit is gewoon tegenwoordige tijd (kan ff zo snel niet opkomen wat het wel moet zijn![]()
and i came above
i made it, so happy
All my luck turns back turned
Not the persons, feelings
love, animals and things
no, only the luck
I use it, to become happy used
I was happy, but that one stap
miss, and i felt again
more deeper and deeper
A want to climb again
But im so tired of it
Don't let me here
its dark, lonely, i'm scared..
please, come here and get me
I want to feel like before
that's all i want, give me
that little peace of luck and love back
Yes, i want to come above
further then i ever bin
i long way to go....
but i will try
Ik weet het, er zitten veel spelfouten
maar het heeft gewoon mn hart even geleegd
alvast bedankt voor het lezen
xx renee