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**Geplaatst door de TopicStarter** : 28-12-07 14:18

[GED] the other side

Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 28-12-07 14:18

When it's hot, you don't know the word cold
When it's good, you don't know the word fault
It was you and me
we were happy
but now it's gone away
my lifetime is end
now see it, it's bad
my soul is dead
my heart is break
you're one big mistake!

Mijn engels is een beetje slecht, dus ik hoop maar dat het klopt Knipoog

Laat me even weten wat je ervan vind, wat er verbeterd kan worden

**Geplaatst**: 28-12-07 15:25

Re: [GED] the other side

Geplaatst: 28-12-07 15:25

vind wat raar lopend gedicht.
even wat verbeteringen Tong uitsteken

Citaat:
When it's hot, you don't know the word cold
When it's good, you don't know the word fault
It was you and me
we were happy
but now it's gone,
my lifetime is ended,
now I/you see it, it's bad
my soul is dead,
my heart is broken,
you're one big mistake!

When it's hot, you don't know the word cold?
Beetje raar. nu zeg je: Waneer het warm is, je kent het woord koud niet.

ik snap hem niet helemaal Tong uitsteken

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