[txt] once upon a time

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[txt] once upon a time

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Ik ben aan het schrijven geweest voor mijn website, ik weet niet of de grammatica precies klopt en/of er nog een leuks aan toegevoegd kan worden, hier is de tekst:

Once upon a time there was a girl
In her early years she had to learn
How to grow up living in a war that she called home
Never know just where to turn for shelter from the storm
Hearing all the yelling she would cry up in her room
Hoping it would be over soon

Suddenly she saw something
She saw the closet
She took her sketchbook
And hided herself in the closet
She started to draw so she could give life an other look
Since that time she lives in her own world
And lever looks back to the past.

Sometimes things are not so easy to forget
All the lines you left along her neck
When She was thrown against cold stairs
And every day She's afraid to come out
In fear of what she might see there