Geplaatst er staan nog fouten in, maar die haalt mijn docent(als ik wat meer heb) er samen met mij uit
Commentaar mag altijd, maar hou er rekening mee dat ik in 4VMBO BBL zit, en mijn engels niet denderend is, ook heeft Ilse (ff boktnaam kwijt) beetje geholpen met wat foutjes!
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Survived on an Island.
This story takes place on an uninhabited Island by the United Kingdom.
The protagonists are :
Maria : A Nineteen years old girl.
Jack : A twenty-one years old boy.
Gandalf : An old fisherman.
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Chapter One
Maria the nineteen years old girl was on a holiday in The Netherlands.
Friday 13th she had the boat back to the United Kingdom, but everything went wrong, very wrong. The weather was not easy, and the storm came up, but... the boat trip goes on.
There was in Holland a story about the ''Friday 13th boat''
Some people said that it was a ghost boat, nobody could survive that trip.
It was a long day, she didn't remember everything.
A boat, raining, thunder and lightning and now...
She lay on a small beach and it was still raining and it's windy.
She asked to herself 'Where am I??? I don't remember that I was going to.. This..
I was going to England with the boat.. What happened with me?'
Maria searched a place to sleep tonight, but it saw very uninhabited.
The only things she had were: some matches, a watch, and a few clothes but these have been soaked.
It's four o’clock, and Maria was hungry.
'Where can I find some food, there’s nobody here, how can I survive here, on my own!' She was thinking.
Maria was talking to herself and walked over the beach.
She saw someone far away, walked in this beach. 'HELLO!?' screamed Maria 'Can you help me please!?'
There came no answer, but the boy waved to Maria.
He came closer to Maria. 'Hello, I'm jack, who are you, and why are you here? You look unhappy.' asked the boy.
‘I’m lost…’ Said maria
‘That’s not so good, where you come from? ‘ asked jack.
‘I come from England, I was on a holiday in The Netherlands, but I have a accident with the boat or something. ‘’ Tall’s maria
‘’ You can go with me to my home, than we go eat, and you can sleep in another room, that’s oke.. ‘’ Said jack
‘oh thanks! I’m hungry ‘ said maria
They walk to jack’s home, it was a small house on the beach, there was a swimming pool and a bubblebath.
In the middle of the garden stand a big tree. Beside the house is the jungle with a small river
‘ Come, let me show you my house!, it’s not big, but I can live here’ told jack.
‘It’s small, but nice I think.’ Said maria
‘’ come, we go eat, you can sleep here, and tomorrow we look on the island. ‘’ said jack
‘it’s okay ‘ Said maria
Around the island
The next day : a sunny day , Maria’s clothes hangs on an fishing-line to the tree to dry in the sun.
Maria were early awake, she can’t sleep anymore.
Its five o’ clock and outside the sun shines.
Maria go outside, she go walk, jack bewake as soon
She walk away from the home to the jungle, but she don’t know that’s dangerous.
further and further she go into the jungle, it’s beautifull.
‘ could I remain here, it’s so beautifull ‘said she to herself.
She have a choice , left or right, ut she don’t know the way
She go back, maby are jack awake. She walk back to the beach, and there she see jack.
‘Maria! Where you come from?? The jungle? ‘ Asked jack carefull
‘ Yes, is that not okay? ‘ Said and Asked maria
‘ You must understand this : the jungle is very dangerous, there lion’s and beer’s and you can fall, and who find you there? ‘ Said Jack.
‘Oke, can we go to the jungle this afternoon? You have a gun for savety? ‘ Asked maria
