Geplaatst Voor een schoolvak pit, moest ik met een groepje een verhaal maken in het engels
Samen met een vriendin heb ik een verhaal gemaakt, en het leek me wel leuk om dit op bokt te zetten. Voor de gene die het leuk vinden om engels te lezen..
Nou als je het hebt gelezen, wil je dan een reactie plaatsen hoe je het vond,
en ik weet het is niet helemaal perfect engels. want k kan totaal geen engels. [ niet erg leuke opdracht dus voor mij ]
Oh ja , je mag ook een titel voor hoofdstuk 6 opgeven
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Summary :
Fabienne and Kate learn Pierre and Pedro on a great party by Bianca. Pedro and Pierre are playing
soccer on the street, so meet the boys the girls. Pedro and Pierre are going with the girls, they going of
the party of Bianca.Perre tried Fabienne to his girlfriend, so kissed her. Fabienne don't know who he was.
And go away of Pierre.Pierre is a little bit to sweet, but fabienne don't realise en goes with him and
ended up in te prostitution. Kate found that Fabienne a little bit to strange behaves, and look afther Fabienne.
Fabienne says nothing because is she do, she have trouble with Perre. Kate and Bianca go to look out what
fabienne does. She find that fabienne n the hand of the loverboys is.
Chapter 1 : Meet the boys.
Fabienne and kate are going to the party of Bianca. Pierre and pedro are playing soccer of the street.
On that moment that the girls walk by, kicks Pierre the ball in the direction of the girls. Kate sees the
ball and kicks him back and smile tot the boys.' Haai chicks, what are you doing so late on the street ? '
shouts Pedro laughing. ' we going to a party of a friend of us ' answer fabienne. ' Are we going
with you two ? ' asked Pedro with a smile on hs face. ' sure ' told Fabienne. ' Is Bianca all right with it ? '
doubted Kate. ' kate, why should Bianca not well findng ? ' asked Fabienne. ' Should you it nice to find
as your best friend with a strange boys on your party come ? ' ' Actual I shouldnt know, Maby we don't do it.'
Afther a while to talk, going the boys with the girls.
Chapter 2: The party
' Hello Bianca, we have two nice boys with us. They are so solitary to soccer, you do agree? ' ask Fabienne.
'I didn't know I like it and of I can trust them,' told Bianca. ' Bianca, you can our faith,' told Pedro. and winks
to Pierre. ' Okay I agree, As your you behave my parents no sense have in crash ' told Bianca.' Sure , we are
quits as mice ' laugs Pierre.' I keep my words ' say Bianca.De boys alk afther Bianca, Kate and Fabienne it houde
inside. In the house is the party beginning. ' Bianca !! ' shouts Fabienne. ' Yes '. ' Where is the drank? ' shouts
Fabienne. ' Into the basement' yelled Bianca. 'Come Pierre, we go look to the drank ' told Fabienne. ' Okay fabienne
i'm coming' told Pierre. 'Bianca !!' yelled Fabienne again.' I can't find the drank ' ' Oh, I don't know were it is ' told
Bianca ' Okay I get the drank for you ' told Pierre and kiss her on the mounth. Fabienne beginning of some one else. Pierre sees it.
' Fabienne I like you' . ' Pierre I don't know who you re, I meet you a few houers' Afther a whilethe walks out of the
basemant . 'Pierre i go to a friend of my' say fabienne. ' all right I go to Pedro' . If Fabienne by Kate sits she told the hole story
' He wants you very much ' say kate, ' yes I think the same' say fabienne. ' he's very sweet to me end he burrow bottle
of drank.' says Fabienne. 'Now thats a handy boy!' laughts Kate. ' Yes he is'
afther a whole night llong party the go tredly home.
Chapter 3: the first 'date'
'Pierre do you know a good paying job for me ' ? ask Fabienne.' Yes I do know a job for you, but I don't know if you
want it.' ' Yes I wont evreything, if it good pays' told Fabienne and kiss Pierre. ' Okay, you can tonight beginng if you
want. ' told pierre sweet. ' sorry I can't , I go to my friends, I promisse to Kate and Bianca. ' ' Yes sorry Fabienne
you must tonight of u can't do it. ' okay Pierre, I call my friends that I cant come.
The phone rings. ' Hee with Bianca' ' Hee with Fabienne, Sorry I can't come tonight, I have a fight with my mother.'
It's a pitty , but you can't nothing to do it' says Bianca. ' I hanging up, my mother shouting , Bye, ' o bye Fabienne
told Bianca.
Chapter 4: The first ‘date’
‘Pierre do you know a good paying job for me ? ‘ say Fabiënne. ‘Yes, I do know a job for you, but I don’t know
if you want it.’ ‘Yes I won’t evreything, if it good pays’. Told Fabiënne. ‘Okay, You can tonight beginnig if you
want.’told pierre sweet. ‘Sorry, I can’t, I go to my friends, I promisse to Kate and Bianca’. ‘Yes, sorry Fabiënne
I most tonight of u can’t do it.’ ‘Okay Pierre I cal my friends that I can not come’.
The phone rings. ‘Hee with Bianca’ ’Hee with Fabiënne, Sorry Bianca I can’t come tonight because I have a fight
with my mum’. ‘It’s a pitty, but u can’t nothing to do it.’says Bianca. ‘I hanging up, my mums shouting, Bye ’ ‘o
bye fabiënne’ told bianca.
‘Pierre I have cold my friends to say what you ask me for ,‘ told Fabiënne to Pierre smiling. ‘Can I start tonight ?
‘ ‘Yes ofcourse darling ‘told Pierre ‘ Sould we go out of diner? ‘ ask pierre ,’and then going to your new job ,
But we must first going to shop.’’Okay pierre, but I don’t have money’ ‘doesn’t matter I pay for you if you give your money ?
‘Pierre, you don’t mean it, me with other boys ? me in de prostution?’ asked Fabiënne. Fabiënne , I have did evreything
for you, and you don’t wanna do this for me, you must. Told Pierre mad. ‘and you don’t say anything to your friends,
than happends not nice things.’ ‘Tonight on 8 pm on the secendstreet 2 is your first place, and don’t let me here
that you not was coming ‘Shouts Pierre. ‘Óh Oh okay Pierre, I don’t want it you was mad ’ cry Fabiënne
Chapter 5:’Fabiënne is lying
The doorbell rings ‘Ha Bianca, nice you was here. ‘ ‘Fabiënne can’t come because she had a fight with her mum ‘
says Kate. ‘I’m sorry Kate, I really don’t believe it. ‘says Bianca. ‘the last time she lies very much , because Pierre
last time with here was , I think. ‘ Should we go to her ? ‘the mum is not sending us back. The doorbell rings
‘ Hee girls ‘ say the mother of Fabiënne friendly ‘ ‘euh hooi, is Fabiënne home ? ‘ say Bianca. ‘no sorry , she is
to Pierre, a good friend of her told she ‘ say Fabiënne’s mum. ‘Okay we going bye’said Kate and Bianca.
‘I find it strange, she is again by Pierre, she is a lying. Fabiënne is not her self anymore ‘ say Bianca. ‘
We talk to her on Monday. '
Chapter 6:
‘He Fabiënne , Do you stil have a fight with your mum ? ask Bianca ‘ ‘fight with my mum ? , Oh no
its over. ‘ says Fabiënne. ‘Shall we do something after school with Bianca ? ‘asked Kate. ‘No, Sorry
I can’t I have to do a shopping for my mother. ‘ say Fabiënne. ‘ Oh ashame. Other time than ? ‘
tried Kate. ‘Sorry I mus no go , go to less and than a shopping for my mother, see you to morrow ‘
‘bye Fabiënne’ say Bianca and Kate in choire.‘Hee with Fabiënne,’ ’Haay hier Pierre, you new shopping
is on the Buckinghamstreet 16, you must be ther on 13.30 pm,’ ‘Sorry Pierre, I cant on that time, I’m sitting
on school. ‘ ‘You must Fabiënne’ says Pierre mad ‘Pierre I don’t wanna that you was mad. I get onofficieel
free of school’ ‘oka I see you 13.15 here at my place. ‘
Bianca and Kate is folling Fabiënne
‘Hay Pierre’says Fabiënne and kiss Pierre.’ ‘Come Fabiënne lets go, or else we coming to late. ‘ The doorbell
rings ‘hee are you the girl who sends Pierre ?’ ask the old man. ‘yes I’m that. ‘ ‘the door bell rings again ‘
who is coming untterrupt me’says the man bad. ‘sorry, we are to late, we heard by the girl inside, for the same
price’ ‘okay thats allright ‘‘KATE, BIANCA what are you doing here, u shouldn’t must’ say Fabiënne dissepointed.
‘Come Fabiënne , we are going here away, Pierre does nothing I swere, else we call the police. He is a loverboy ‘say Kate.
Chapter 7 : Evreything is over.
‘Fabiënne hanny , I don’t know that you doing this’Cried the mother of Fabiënne. ‘The police got Pierre for Prostution,
you are save now, you don’t have to do that anymore’ say Fabiënne.
‘Oh girls, I’m so happy that you was folling me, otherwise I was so deep and deep in the prostution. I’m so happy with you as my friend.’
‘Your welcome girl ‘say Fabiënne and Kate.
En hoe vond je het ?
Liefs B_rowny
