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**Geplaatst door de TopicStarter** : 18-06-06 22:38

[ged] Went to a party

Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 18-06-06 22:38

Went to a Party

I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mum
So I had a sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right,
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece,
I never knew what was coming,
Mum Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mum, his voice seems far away.

My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.

I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high,
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mum
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Someone should ! have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I'd still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, Mum..
I'm getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And I'm so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mum,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mum!"
So I love you and good-bye.

Niet door mij gemaakt, maar ik vind het wel heel mooi!

**Geplaatst**: 18-06-06 22:45

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Geplaatst: 18-06-06 22:45

Vrij bekend gedichtje ja, en erg mooi, dat zeker

Alleen is het niet de bedoeling om op UK/CB gedichtjes van anderen te posten die je mooi vind, maar alleen eigen werk:

Citaat:
5) UK is vooral bedoeld voor het laten zien van je eigen werk. Als je vader / vriendin / kennis een tekening gemaakt heeft die je wil showen is dat toegestaan, maar zomaar een grappig plaatje van internet plukken is niet de bedoeling. Het bespreken van kunstenaars / fotografen mag wel.

**Geplaatst**: 18-06-06 23:10

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Geplaatst: 18-06-06 23:10

Zie Wildwings post, hier dus een slotje.

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