Geplaatst The frozen world
Snow in every tree
A soft glow
Pearls on the roof
As a winter dance
A web of pure satin
like a soft curtain
The hedges white and nice
But the most beautiful of all
Are the tears at the trees
The water as a frozen waterfall
The spring will come soon
Sadness
The emotions on your face
Tell me what you feel
The look in your eyes
Tells me that you are sad
But why are you sad?
Because it’s over
Between you and her
That’s the reason
If it was possible
To fly away
From the sadness
Where you are going trough
Ziet iemand nog grammaticale fouten of spelfouten?
Zelf vind ik de laatste zin van het tweede gedicht een beetje raar.
echt mooi! *raar dat je verder nog een reacties hebt * 
