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**Geplaatst door de TopicStarter** : 31-10-05 19:32

[ged] my life..

Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 31-10-05 19:32

Times where great before it happens
talking, laughing, just having fun
It felt like I had a home there

But you are not like you told me
or what you're friends said to me
you where everything I didn't expect

At that night it went wrong
You knowed I could't do anything
that I wasn't there at te moment

After that you did like noting happend
Like I was stupid,like I didn't know it
But I remember this untill the end of my life

Almost two months ago,but for me like yesterday
Memories are locked-up in my head
Tears are flowing, like it never ends

One day I'll visit you,where-ever you are
And make you sorry for what's happend
Make you sorry for the day we met

I'll make you're life a living hell

**Geplaatst**: 31-10-05 21:00

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Geplaatst: 31-10-05 21:00

Er zitten nogal wat foutjes in

Citaat:
Times
were
great before it
happened
talking, laughing, just having fun
It felt like I had a home there

But you are not like you told me
or what
your friends said to me
you were everything I didn't expect

At that night it went wrong
You knew I couldn't do anything
that I wasn't there at te moment

After that, you did like nothing happened
Like I was stupid, like I didn't know it
But I will remember this untill the end of my life

Almost two months ago, but for me it feels like yesterday
Memories are locked up in my head
Tears are flowing, like it will never end

One day I'll visit you, wherever you are
And make you feel sorry for what happened
Make you feelsorry for the day we met

I'll make your life a living hell

Where is waar in het Engels.
Als je was/ waren bedoeld, kan je were gebruiken

You're is you bent.
Your is jouw.

Dat wordt vaak door elkaar gehaald.

Misschien kan je 'did like nothing happened' beter vervangen door 'you pretended nothing ever happened' o.i.d.

Verder, het gedicht zelf is heftig, maar het komt niet helemaal over op mij. Het idee wel, wat er gebeurd kan zijn ook, maar de emoties niet echt. Hoewel ik wel goed de woede voel, maar niet echt het verdriet etc.

**Geplaatst door de TopicStarter** : 01-11-05 10:05

Re: [ged] my life..

Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 01-11-05 10:05

Hmm. had ik toch maar beter opgelet tijdens de engelse les

Wat jij erbij/veranderd heb klopt helemaal, loopt ook beter zo.

Wat de emoties betreft; het enige waar ik nu mee rondloop ís ook woede, geen verdriet oid. Vandaar dat dat ook zo ''eruit'' komt waarschijnlijk.

**Geplaatst**: 01-11-05 13:04

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Geplaatst: 01-11-05 13:04

Vind em niet zo heel mooi,
spreekt me niet echt aan

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**Geplaatst**: 08-11-05 03:12

Re: [ged] my life..

Geplaatst: 08-11-05 03:12

Times were great before it happened,
Talking, laughing, just having fun,
It felt like I had a home there.

But it is as if you told me,
Or what your friends said to me,
You were nothing I expected.

At that night it went wrong,
You knew I couldn't do anything,
That I wasn't there at the time.

After that you acted like nothing had happened
Like I was stupid, like I didn't know
But I will remember this untill the end of my life

It was almost two months ago,
But it felt like yesterday,
The memories are locked up in my head,
Tears are flowing, like it will never end.

One day I'll visit you, where ever you are,
And make you feel sorry for what happened,
Make you feel sorry for the day we met.

I'll make your life a living hell

Nee, die living hell maakt je niet veel sympathieker, laat dat er maar uit.