[ged] Falling

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[ged] Falling

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 08-10-05 12:27

ik hoop dat mensen het een beetje kunnen lezen in het engels


Falling

You and I, we were together.
We were higher than the clouds
We were in heaven

Everything was so perfect
We had the best time.
Why did you have to push me off?
I don’t want to go down there.

Slowly I can see the ground coming closer and closer.
Tears are blown away by the strong wind.
I scream, but no one is there to listen.

Except for you
You are standing there, looking down at me.
I’m trying to stretch my arms
Hoping you would take my hand, and pull me back up again
but you wont ,your rejecting my hand.

Im almost there
Almost at the point of getting crashed
Why did you do this?

Im trying to talk to you:
There is still some time left, grab my hand!
But you turn your face.

So many questions going through my head
Is this it?
How did this happen?
Where did It go wrong?

I could see the ground, I was about to hit it
The time just stopped for while
Memories went through my head
Memories of me and you, spending time together

For a few seconds I saw your face right in front of me.
You were there, smiling at me.

Suddenly your face disappeared that’s when it all happened.
Its when I crashed.
Its when you broke up with me.

Felice

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Re: [ged] Falling

Link naar dit bericht Geplaatst: 08-10-05 18:24

Ondanks dat hij een beetje cliché-achtig is, vooral het begin, vind ik hem toch heel erg mooi
Hij is ook erg herkenbaar voor mij, ik heb ook zoiets willen schrijven toen ik in dezelfde situatie zat, maar dat lukte me toen niet echt.

Trouwens moeten de laatste twee zinnen niet beter 'it was when' zijn?