[tekst] I felt so bad....
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[tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 20-07-05 11:05
Ik moest het opschrijven, want ik moest het kwijt.
Het gaat over mijn relatie die na 3jr nu net 1 week over is....
Sorry voor de lengte!!!
I felt so bad, no reasons to do something,
Nothing that I did changed my feelings.
I couldn’t tell anybody, they didn’t understand…
They didn’t care….
Then there came you….I was like; Yeah Right…
But you saw something in me…. You listened to me…
You cared about me…
When I was feeling worse than; you were there…
And why? I did never understand…
Something between us was growing… I was so scared…
Scared to loose you with those feelings…
I was so scared that I took refuge…
But I couldn’t escape from those feelings…
Let’s try and see I said…
That ‘Let’s try and see’ duration was a week…
Then a month…Then a year…and it ended after three years…
I was so happy… because you were always there for me…
It was so hard to keep on going, because of my and my situation..
But we kept on going and my love for you was only growing…
You did more for me than I did for you… Well I thought;
I’ll show you when it’s time; how much you mean to me…
I want to let it know sooner… but I couldn’t…
I hadn’t any energy and I was so frustrated about other things…
I thought you would wait for me, because you knew how much I love you…
But you love for me was decreasing…
You didn’t tell me… and I was too blind to see….
I was hoping that you’ll wait…
But you already gave up, without telling me….
Now I never had the chance to tell you this…
I love you…
I love your eyes, your laugh and your chest
I love your tows, your ass, just everything…
But the most thing I love about you, is just you
You as a person… The way you talk, the way you move, the way you are…
And then I didn’t mention the best thing… I was feeling safe with you
Just sitting there in you arms… I couldn’t be more fortunate…
I was always wondering why you wanted me… Why you choose this ugly girl…
And why you stayed with me…
But you always told me that you love me…
Yes, with you I wanted to be happy…
You would help me trough this hard time…
You would be there for me… forever…
You gave me hope… but without you I’m nothing…
Nobody can let me feel that protected than you…
Nobody can touch me like you…
Nobody can love me like you…
The days are passing away…
I thought I would get over you…
But it only gets worse….
First I missed you in the evening,
Than I missed you also in the morning,
Than I missed you the whole day,
No I miss you every second….
I’m just going crazy…
I can’t help it… I don’t understand…
Why can’t it be?
I was so happy…so lucky….
And now I’m the opposite…
Everything looks black, dark and cold…
Now I never showed you how much I love you… That’s the worst thing…
You’ll never know how it could be… when I’m feeling okay…
When I’ve the energy to tell you and to let you feel it…
Bedankt voor het lezen, leef je nog?
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Re: I felt so bad....
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Re: I felt so bad....
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Re: I felt so bad....
Geplaatst: 20-07-05 12:33
had gewoon kippenvel.
knap gedaan!
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 20-07-05 13:20
Ellende schreef:[tag] toegevoegd in je titel, voortaan zelf aan denken aub. Voor meer info: de bedoeling, bovenaan CB.
Sorry! Even in dezelfde stemming gedaan als gedicht...
@ laura1987: Bedankt!
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 20-07-05 21:23
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 21-07-05 15:52
Bedankt voor de berichtjes...
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst: 24-07-05 15:47
ik ben ff in een super lastige bui en ben echt ongelukkig. maar door dit te lezen besef ik wel dat ik niet de enige ben! dus ik wens je enorm veel sterkte toe..
en ik moet zeggen dat ik door je 'gedicht' te lezen er wel wat bovenop ben gekomen...
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Re: [tekst] I felt so bad....
Geplaatst: 24-07-05 18:11
echt heel knap gedaan.
je heb wel wat fouten gemaakt in je engels:
I felt so bad, no reasons to do something,
Nothing I did changed my feelings.
I couldn’t tell anybody, they wouldn't understand…
They didn’t care….
Then there you came….I was like; Yeah Right…
But you saw something in me…. You listened to me…
You cared about me…
When I felt worse than; you were there…
And why? I never understood.
Something between us was growing… I was so scared…
Scared to loose you with those feelings…
I was so scared that I took refuge…
But I couldn’t escape from those feelings…
Let’s try and see I said…
That ‘Let’s try and see’ duration was a week…
Then a month…Then a year…and it ended after three years…
I was so happy… because you were always there for me…
It was so hard to keep on going, because of me and my situation..
But we kept on going and my love for you was only growing…
You did more for me than I did for you… Well I thought;
when it was time i'd show much you mean to me…
I wanted to let you know sooner… but I couldn’t…
I didn't have any energy and I was so frustrated about other things…
I thought you would wait for me, because you knew how much I loved you…
But your love for me was decreasing…
You didn’t tell me… and I was too blind to see….
I hoped that you’d wait…
But you already gave up, without telling me….
Now I never had the chance to tell you this…
I love you…
I love your eyes, your laugh and your chest
I love your toes, your ass, just everything…
But what I love about you the most, is just you
You as a person… The way you talk, the way you move, the way you are…
And then I didn’t mention the best thing… I was feeling safe with you
Just sitting there in you arms… I couldn’t be more fortunate…
I was always wondering why you wanted me… Why you choose this ugly girl…
And why you stayed with me…
But you always told me that you loved me…
Yes, i wanted to be happy with you …
You would help me trough this hard time…
You would be there for me… forever…
You gave me hope… but without you I’m nothing…
Nobody can let me feel so protected like you…
Nobody can touch me like you do…
Nobody can love me like you do…
The days are passing away…
I thought I would get over you…
But its only getting worse….
First I missed you in the evening,
Than I also missed you in the morning,
Than I missed you the whole day,
Now I miss you every second….
I’m just going crazy…
I can’t help it… I don’t understand…
Why can’t it be?
I was so happy…so lucky….
And now I’m the opposite…
Everything looks black, dark and cold…
Now I never showed you how much I love you… That’s the worst thing…
You’ll never know how it could be… when I’m feeling okay…
When I’ve got the energy to tell you and to let you feel it…
je engels was wel goed,maar ik het zo gemaakt dat het wat beter klinkt
bijv als jij zegt '' when i was feeling worse then you '' kun je beter zeggen : '' when i felt worse the you ''een erg mooi gedicht !!!
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