[verhaal] Christmas dilemma

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[verhaal] Christmas dilemma

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ik had een idee gekregen om iets te maken wat eigelijk een beetje lijkt op de club van sinterklaas wat je ook op tv ziet. alleen is het nu over een band die wordt gekidnapped door een obsessed fan.
netzoals al mijn andere verhalen is deze ook in het engels want ik post het ook op andere fora.

Christmas Dilemma

Written by: Nienna
Genre: christmas, comedy
Summary: The guys are giving a special concert on Christmas eve, but o no.. something bad happens to them. The tour bus is kidnapped by an obsessed fan and is planned to keep TR to herself. And so many fans wanted to see their special performance! Will they be back on time for the concert?

Part 1:

The guys were all sitting in the tour bus. And Aki was a bit angry and started shouting to everyone who was in the bus. “I can’t believe that we have to perform on Christmas Eve!” Lauri raised his hands, when Aki was about to shout against him “hey! Don’t look at me. It wasn’t my idea.” Aki now sat down. “You are right! It’s just they I had some great plans planned for Christmas eve..”
“What did you want to do then?”
“I wanted to do some crazy stuff, you know. Dressing myself like Santa Claus, running through the street.. I don’t know.. It doesn’t matter anymore..”
Lauri smiled. “You wanted to run like Santa Claus through the streets?” Aki now laughed “a bit weird huh!”
“Are you crazy! That’s nuts! Only lunatics do that!” Aki now punched Lauri on his arm “thanks for supporting me!”
“By the way? When is the bus going to stop? I really need to stretch my legs for a moment?” just when Aki said that, the bus slowed down and after a few minutes it stopped. Through the bus you heard the driver speaking “okay boys, you can stretch your legs for a moment.. Just make sure that you are back after an hour!”

The guys all got out of the bus and looked around. “It’s just another road restaurant.” They walked inside. When they got in the people who were already inside looked at them. Then two girls appeared with a piece of paper. “Wow, the Rasmus.. Can we have your autographs?”
“Sure… here you go” the girls quickly walked away still giggling about the fact that they’ve got some autographs. Pauli walked further inside and got some food for him, when he came back everyone looked at him. “What?”
Lauri was still looking at the big plate with so may things on it that it almost fell off, when Aki said: “o nothing, just the fact that we just ate something in the bus and that you are here standing with whatever you got on your plate” Pauli grinned “I am hungry” Eero looked at Pauli who was now busy eating everything what was on his plate “you are always hungry!”

After an hour the guys returned to the bus, when they got in they noticed that someone got in after them. It was a small person with a black beanie on and a really big scarf which was meant to hide the persons face, though the nose still stuck out between the scarf and the beanie. The person now shouted to the driver “close the door, or I’ll blow up this bus!” in the hands was a little black box which the person now held up high “see this box, it’s the controller of the explosives.. An now close this door!” the driver looked at the guys who nodded and then he closed the bus. Good now drive, we stop when I tell you to stop and you’ll go wherever I tell you to go or else I blow up this bus!” the guys were still standing while the bus began to move. Aki was the first one who dared to speak something. “Why do you want to blow this bus up?”
The person first looked around. “First give me your phones! And whatever is used to contact other people… and then I mean everything! And you better co-operate!!” the person held up the little box again. The guys clearly overwhelmed by it, immediately started to search for everything what was meant to communicate with each other. They came back with laptops, cell phones, note books, more phones.. Lauri now came forward to the person, holding up two cans with a long rope between it. “This too?”
“Yes that too!” A big pile of things now lay in front of the bus. “Good” the person now took off the beanie and the scarf and a girls face was now shown. “It’s a girl!” Lauri shouted through the bus! The girl reacted by shouting back. “So what? Are girls less than boys?” Lauri shouted back to the girl again “I didn’t said that!” the girl shouted again: “but you thought so!” it was Pauli who now interfered between them “ehm, guys can you stop shouting? You are standing 6 feet away from each other.. And my ears are starting to hurt” the girl now reacted again. “Don’t be smart with me!.. And take the next turn right” that last part she said to the driver!

Part 2:

It has been a few hours since the guys were kidnapped. They all sat on their seats silently waiting for what would happen next. the girl self constantly looked at the guys. Aki was playing a bit with his drumsticks when he looked up and saw her looking at him “what are you looking at?”
“I can look at whatever I want to look at! ”It was now Pauli who reacted “by the way, who are you? And way are you kidnapping us?” the girl grinned “isn’t that obvious? You guys are famous and the hottest band ever and you are all mine!”

the girl cackled and while she did that there was a lightning flash and some ominous music started to play.

Lauri looked through the window “but it’s sunny outside?” the girl grinned “yes.. But it won’t be sunny with Christmas!”

there was another lightning flash and some ominous music.

Pauli got himself a ridiculously long sandwich “that was pretty cool.. Can you do that again?”
“Sure!”

the girl cackled again, a lightning flash appeared and the ominous music started to play again.

The guys looked at the girl with wide open eyes “wow.. She’s so evil!.. Do it again?” the girl did it again and again and again until the driver interrupted “where to go now?”
“Just go left right lift or something like that! As long as you aren’t going the way that you are supposed to go!” Pauli was done with eating his sandwich and grabbed another ridiculously long sandwich out of his pocket. Eero looked at Pauli “where do you get all of these ridiculously long sandwiches?” Pauli shrugged “don’t know, do you want one?” Eero nodded “sure!” a few minutes later everybody in the bus was eating a ridiculously long sandwich.

“I’m bored! ”Aki said while he sighted on his seat. Lauri who sat next to him also answered “yeah, me too! Can’t we get out for a moment?.. To stretch our legs?” the girl who sat next to the driver looked back “so that you can run away?.. I don’t think so!” the driver now reacted again “I’m sorry but we’ll have to stop for a moment because we are almost out of fuel!” the girl looked a bit angry “fine! You win.. But they are staying with me in the bus!” the girl pointed at Lauri and Aki who now looked a bit shocked. “Why us?” the girls eyes almost changed into hearts “because you two are the hottest members of the band.. And you are all mine!”

then she cackled again. A lightning flash appeared again together with the ominous music.

Eero rubbed in his eyes “you really got to stop that!” Lauri and Aki still looked shocked “but.. But it was our idea?”
“i don’t care! You two stay with me… Here… in the bus!”

Part 3:

Pauli grinned, “I guess you two are stuck here! ”Eero and Pauli stepped outside, quickly followed by the girl “And remember! Be back in twenty minutes, don’t say a word to other people or else.. There will be some big fireworks here! ”Eero and Pauli nodded and walked to the little shop at the gas station.
The girl got back inside with the still two disappointed guys. Lauri looked through the window and saw Pauli and Eero getting inside the shop “you know.. We could be there!..” Aki now looked as well “Yes I know, I always thought that being kidnapped would be fun..” Aki now looked at the girl “how old are you anyway?”
“I’m already eighteen years old!” Lauri sighted “we are kidnapped by an eighteen years old obsessed fan and we are dead bored!” the girl had a weird shine in her eyes “I know something what we can do”

In the mean time Eero and Pauli were walking through the little shop “poor Lauri, it must be awful for him to be kidnapped by an obsessed fan and not being able to stretch his legs” Eero found himself a booklet with the new yoga exercises “yes, it must be hard for him, we all know how much he likes it to stretch his legs!” then suddenly a group of people not really older than sixteen approached the guys. At the look of their faces they were all fans “hey, aren’t you Eero and Pauli from the Rasmus?” Pauli and Eero nodded “that’s right!” the group looked a bit confused at them while a few seconds later a girl said: “but weren’t you guys on your way to your special concert? And this is not exactly the good road to the concert..” Pauli got a bit nervous and got himself another ridiculously long sandwich to calm down. Eero didn’t know what to say either because in his back head he heard the threatening voice of the obsessed fan. “We are just a bit lost,, ”Pauli was finished eating his sandwich “yeah, it’s not that we are being kidnapped by an obsessed fan!..”

ominous music starts to play. and Everybody looked around to see where the ominous music came from.

Eero looked on his watch “anyway we have got to go now.. Bye!.. ”Pauli and Eero ran away from the group of fans to the bus. When they arrived they saw that Lauri, Aki, the obsessed fan and the driver were throwing pieces of crumbled paper to each other’s, which all difference from size. When the girl threw a piece of crumbled paper towards Lauri the little black box a.k,a, the controller of the bomb, fell out of the girls pocket. The driver noticed it and quickly picked it up. The driver walked to the girl and gave the little box back “here, this fell out of your pocket, better be careful next time!” the girl looked surprised but a smile appeared on her face “yeah, I will!” finally the girl noticed that Eero and Pauli were standing in the bus looking really weird at them. The girl immediately changed to a serious face “you haven’t talked to anyone have you?” Pauli and Eero looked at each other, not really knowing what to say. “Well there were some fans...”
“Have you said anything about the kidnapping?” they now both began to stutter. “Well.. Ehm, you know.., at least not in a direct way!” the girl slapped her forehead with her palm and sighted “driver we are going!

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leuk verhaal!! Tong uitsteken

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Part 4:

The group of fans looked at the tour bus that now quickly drove away like it was in a hurry. A boy with a Rasmus shirt on said: “Have you heard what they said?” a girl reacted “yeah.. They are being kidnapped by an obsessed fan”

Ominous music starts to play

“We have to save them.. Not just for us but for all of the Rasmus fans!”
“Yeah!” they all got on their bicycles because weren’t old enough for their driver’s license and quickly followed the bus, after a few seconds the bus was out of sight. “Hey, were did the bus go?” A Pauli fan reacted “let’s get ourselves a ridiculously long sandwich and think of something!”

“I can’t believe that you’ve told someone!” the girl said with an angry voice while she was walking through the narrow path of the tour bus. She was obliviously giving the guys a lecture. “What did I say before you two left the bus?” Eero and Pauli looked answered together “Don’t speak to somebody..”
“And what have you two done?”
“We have spoken to someone”
“And what do I have to do now?” Pauli and Eero looked at each other, they didn’t know the answer. Aki now jumped up from his seat with his hand up in the air “oh.. I know, I know.. You have to blow up the bus!” the girl looked at Aki but then a smile appeared on her face “that’s right.. I should!” she searched in her pockets for the little black box but she couldn’t find it. “It’s gone!” she started searching for the little black box but she couldn’t find it, even the guys looked for the box until Lauri held up the little box “Found it!” the girl really over excited clapped in her hands “good, now give it back to me!” when the girl wanted to take the box out of Lauri’s hand, Lauri pulled his arm away. And held it in up in the air so that the girl couldn’t reach the box anymore. “No, I’m not giving it!”
“O come on, I need it!”
“Why should I give it to you?”
“Because I’m your kidnapper!” the girl tried to find ways to get the box back, she stood on a seat and jumped on Lauri’s back but it didn’t help. Because when she came near Lauri moved his hand elsewhere. The others all cheered for Lauri. “Lauri!, Lauri, Lauri.’ After a few minutes the girl gave up, she stood with watery eyes in front of Lauri ready to cry. Lauri looked into her eyes and felt pity “no.. No.. Don’t cry.. I don’t want you to cry, because then I’ll cry.. See I’m crying!” Tears now rolled over Lauri’s face as well “here is the box, now please stop crying” the girls mood immediately changed, she smiled and gave Lauri a kiss on the cheek. Then she began to scream and run around “I kissed Lauri, I kissed Lauri!” Lauri and the others looked at the girl, totally surprised by her sudden mood swing.

On a bench in the park were the group of fans making up a plan about how to save the guys from the obsessed fan. “So we follow them.. Jump on the bus, get inside unnoticed, and overwhelm the obsessed fan and save the guys!”
“Okay, let’s go!” they all got on the bicycles ready to go when suddenly a woman’s voice shouted through the park. “Jack! Dinnertime!” a boy, also know as the Pauli fan shouted back: “coming!” then he looked at the group “sorry but it’s dinnertime and I’m not allowed to go out after dinner, but I can save the guys tomorrow?” he bicycled away, leaving the others in the park. A girl who had took command of operation ‘STARF’ (save the Rasmus fan group plus an A) now said: “it’s just one person less, let’s go!” the group didn’t move at al and a few seconds later the boy with the Rasmus shirt on said: “sorry, but it’s dinnertime and I’m hungry! And perhaps tomorrow is a better plan.. See ya!” the rest also agreed and left with the same reasons leaving the girl who took command behind. “Fine! First we have dinner! Then tomorrow we save them!”

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Part 5:

Aki grinned, he was watching the girl, Lauri, Eero and Pauli playing monopoly and Lauri was about to now loos all his money so started cheating. “That’s 500! You’ll have to pay!”
“That’s not true!”
“Yes it is! You are on my land and my hotel!”
“Your land? That’s my cart you are holding.. Give it back!” the girl jumped up to get her card back and knocked the board on the ground. “Look what you have done! Now we can’t finish the game”
“Well it doesn’t matter because I’m already finished” the girl walked away Clearly angry with Lauri. Aki was still laughing about this, and then Lauri looked at him with an angry face “what? This is one of the reason I don’t play board games!” Pauli was getting everything of the board together and Eero helped him. “They are throwing everything on the floor and we have to clean it!”
Lauri muttered, “You know, we must find a way to escape.. I mean.. We are being kidnapped” everybody now looked serious except for Pauli because he was eating a ridiculously long sandwich. “Wie myth coolt ruun aweeie iv wie hefe anoterrrrr stoopp” the guys a looked at Pauli. Eero sighted “please swallow before you actually say something because we couldn’t understand a word you were saying!”
“I said: that we could run away if we have another stop.”
“Not really a good plan, she will blow up the bus, and she won’t let us all go out and certainly not after the last time” Aki looked at Eero and Pauli “and who’s fault was that?” Pauli stuck his tongue out. Lauri looked through the window and saw a girl on a bicycle next to the bus with on her back written in Yellow the letters: STARS. Lauri couldn’t believe it, rubbed into his eyes and then he looked again. This time there was no sign of a little girl on a bicycle. “That’s weird...”
“What’s weird?” Aki asked him. “.. Nothing… I just thought I saw someone.. Why don’t we go practise our songs?”
“You know.. You and not being able to smoke because you have run out of cigarettes is doing weird things to your mind.. We are on a highroad!”

The fan was exhausted. The news about the kidnapping has spread around the Internet and right when she was on her way home she saw the tour bus. Though the attempt op following the bus failed. She got her cell phone and dialled the number of STARS. “I’ve god some good and bad news about the guys kidnapping.” The boy at the other side of the line answered, “you have to talk in codes dummy! Or else the HIM lovers will try to stop us and put Ville on stage with Christmas.. Now give me the good news first”
“Okay.. The code.. Santa Claus just passed by on his way to the North pool and was being chased by reindeers.”
“And the bad news?”
“The crow has fallen down his nest and has broken his neck..” there was a silence at the other side of the line. But after a few seconds the boy asked: your code name and the location please.”
“The name is: nutcracker and the location is somewhere on a highroad, which is going east. I think that they are going to Mexico..”
“Thank you Nutcracker.. You have done enough for today” the boy hung up. The girl sighted, got on her bicycle and went on her way back home.

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Part 6:

Lauri looked through the window, the girl sat in front next to the driver telling him the directions. Suddenly Lauri saw a little light approaching the bus “hey guys look at this!” the others gathered around Lauri and they all looked through the window. There were two boys on one bicycle who now drove next to the bus. One boy now tried to stand. “What are they doing?”
“Don’t know.. But it looks like a circus!” Pauli got himself a ridiculously long sandwich “I like the circus!” they all watched at the boy who now tried to throw something to the bus. “What is he doing?”
“Beats me, open the window ands ask them!” Eero walked to a small window and opened it then he shouted: Hey, what are you doing?” the boy on the bicycle shouted back: “we have come to save you!” the one who was standing threw a phone through the window almost against Eero’s head. Unfortunately the boy didn’t see the branch and got smacked off the bicycle. The guys all showed their compassion. “Oew.. That got to hurt!” the boy who was now alone on the bicycle looked back to see where his friend was which wasn’t a good idea as well because he didn’t see the next tree what blocked his path. The guys looked with shocked faces now. “They tried to save us with a.. Phone?” Eero held up the phone. He shrugged “guess so.. The only thing I wonder about is.. What’s that tree doing in the middle of the road?” Aki looked at the girl, she hasn’t noticed a thing about what just happened. “Guys.. I think it’s time to escape!..”

A lightning flash appeared and some ominous music played

The girl looked back “could you stop that please? I’m trying to sleep..”

The two boys walked home because the bicycle got smashed against the tree. “We have done it!”
“Yeah!.. Mission: deliver presents before Christmas has been accomplished!” from the bushes they heard someone saying “roger” then they saw the person running away. The boys looked at each other. “Wow.. STARS have gone really big!”

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Part 7:

The guys sat around the table watching the phone what was laying in the middle of the table. After a while Lauri watched on his watch “so.. What are we supposed to do now?” they heard that the girl was coming their way so Pauli grabbed the phone and put it in his pocket. “Hey, what are you all doing here? O wait that’s right.. I’ve kidnapped you!” the girl cackled then suddenly there was a ringing sound coming out of Pauli’s pocket. There was a silence but then the girl asked Pauli “what’s that sound?” the guys got it all hot but Lauri quickly said: “Pauli is an expert in copying sounds.. He’s showing us the sound of a phone.. Because we have forgotten how that sounded” again the phone rang. The girl looked at him and then she smiled “wow, you are really good at it!” the girl walked away and the guys sighted of relief. They were about to lay the phone on the table again when the girl came back again. “You know.. Something tells me that you are hiding something.. O well” the girl walked away again. When the phone was almost on the table again the girl showed up again. “But I don’t think you guys are capable in hiding things in a situation like this” and she walked away again. Pauli got the phone out of his pocket again and wanted to put it on the table but like all the other times the girl showed up again. Aki mumbled something “talking about being annoying!” the girl looked at them, by the way what is it that you are hiding under the table?” the guys got it all hot again and even Pauli couldn’t bear to eat a ridiculously long sandwich. Aki wiped away some sweat. “It’s hot in here!.. It’s nothing really! Just a remote control.”
“Remote control of what?”
“Ehm.. The TV”
“The remote control of the TV is over there!” the girl pointed at the remote control, which lay next to the TV. “Did I say the TV? I meant Radio!”
“The radio doesn’t have a remote control!”
“It does now!” she looked at Aki like she already knew what was going on. “Hey what’s that smell? it looks like something is burning!” Lauri said while he was sniffing around. Some smoke appeared and the girls face went pale “my chocolate cookies!” the girl ran away. And Pauli was about to follow the girl but Eero pulled him back. “This is our time stupid! Now she’s gone and we can call someone!” Eero dialled a number and waited for a few seconds. “Hello.. I would like to order three large pizzas with anything on it and just write it down on our bill.. Yeah that’s right this is Eero. Just bring it to our tour bus on a highroad it’s not that hard to miss.. Okay. Thank you, bye!” the guys all looked at Eero. “What?”

At the STARS secret hideout someone lay down his phone. “They are not picking up the phone.” The girl who took command was lost in thoughts but then quickly stood up. Too bad she bumped her head at the ceiling. The girl freaked out and shouted: “who has built this three house!!! I can’t even stand!” someone answered “we have robbed this three house from third graders remember!..” the girl calmed down “o.. That’s right.. I forgot.. Now where was I?” the girl thought again and nobody interrupted her because the girl was clearly in a bad mood.

Part 8:

“Hey can you play some songs for me?.. Please? Very please!” the girl kept looking at the guys. Lauri nodded and went on his way to get his guitar but then Aki stopped him. “No!”
“But she is a fan!”
“ Yes, but not a good fan.. She is a kidnapper!”

A lightning flash appeared together with some ominous music.

The girl was blinded for a moment by the lightning flash. When she was able to see something again she saw that the guys all wore sunglasses. They took the sunglasses off. “Hey where did the sunglasses came from?” the guys smiles “we were prepared! the broche on Eero’s sweater told us.. You know that thing actually talks!” Eero wiggled the broche around and with a high voice pretending like it was the broche what talked he said: “Yeah I sure do!” the girl kept staring at Eero and Eero stared back. Lauri looked at Aki “what are they doing?”
“Don’t know.. Perhaps they are doing a staring contest”
“Then I already know the winner! Eero is the best!”
“Yes but the girl looks strong as well!” Pauli got a ridiculously long sandwich but instead of eating it he started talking to it. “Who will be the winner? Is it the obsessed fan? Or is it the super swinging bass player of the best rock band ever, he is also listening to the name.. Eero! Our yoga guy is doing good but the girl isn’t afraid of him and keeps staring!” Lauri sat down. “This is weird! He doesn’t even get something when he wins!” the he stood up and walked to the driver “where are we going?” the driver had an evil grin on his face “right where we were supposed to go!” Aki heard that and now stood next to Lauri “but How? I thought we were supposed to be miles away?”
“I found out that the girl isn’t good in reading maps, she constantly held the map up side down. So I used that in our benefit!”
“That’s brilliant!” then Aki looked back and saw that Eero and the girl were still staring

At the STARS secret hideout there were a lot of fans gathered “they have got the phone!” everybody cheered, “so lets begin with phase two! Send out the night Hawks!” everybody cheered again and then they went back to their assignment.
The nighthawks gathered “there is a new assignment for us boys! Do everything you must do.. But don’t fail!”

Part 9:

The guys were sleeping when they suddenly heard someone screaming. Lauri sat up immediately and bumped his head at the bed above. “Who the hell is responsible for the nice bump on my head?” Aki who lay on the bed above sat up straight rubbing his back. “Man you have got a really heard head!” Lauri mumbled something like “jerk”. Then they heard another scream. Pauli and Eero looked at each other “who is going to check it out?” there was a long silence between the guys and everybody looked at the floor. Everybody looked up again when there was a lightning flash. “Hey! Did someone cackled or did something evil?” everybody shook their heads. “Damm!” Aki pretended like he wasn’t afraid and wanted to walk to the driver until there was another scream, which didn’t last that long this time. Aki quickly turned around. “Lauri.. Because you are the dumbest.. You have got the honour!” Lauri was shocked “what.. No way!” everybody nodded and pushed Lauri away so that he had to walk. Lauri wanted to turn back but the guys blocked the path. “This is so not fair!” Lauri found a baseball stick so he secured himself with it. With the stick up he continued walking but very slowly! Lauri looked back after a few steps, hoping that the guys would let him come back. Everybody had his or her thumbs up. “You can do it Lauri!” Lauri mumbled again “guess there is no turning back now!”

Lauri was almost at the driver it was just a few steps away but then he noticed the black dressed figures with feathers on their head. Lauri became angry. “If those are my feathers!.. I swear I’ll kill you!” the figures looked up. Lauri couldn’t see their faces because they were covered by a beanie with some holes in it for the eyes. The figures walked towards Lauri, and now Lauri saw that the obsessed fan was tied together with a robe and that she was sitting in a gigantic cooking pan, with in her mouth an apple. Lauri sniffed around. “Hey.. What are you cooking?” someone of the black dressed figures stood right in front of Lauri. First the person looked like it was going to attack Lauri but then person relaxed a bit and started to talk. “We are making soup! I got the recipe of my grandmother.”
“Wow, it smells delicious.. Can I?” the person nodded. Lauri walked to the gigantic pan, got a spoon from another person and tasted the soup. “Mm.. I think it needs some salt!..”
“ Really?” the guy Lauri talked to also taste the soup. “Yeah, you are right! It does need some salt!”
“And perhaps some carrots... Yeah that might do the trick!”
“Hey you know a lot about this!”
“Yeah, well I always wanted to become a cook!” the obsessed sat in the cooking pan looking furious at Lauri. She wanted to say something but because of the apple in her mother Lauri couldn’t understand a word. Lauri looked at the person next to him. “What is she saying?” the person shrugged “don’t know!” Lauri got the apple out of the girl’s mouth. “What did you say?”
“I said that you are a idiot. These people are cooking me!”
“Hmm, I never knew that you were food?”
“I’m not! you f...” Lauri quickly put the apple back in her mouth so the girl couldn’t speak anymore. Lauri turned around and smiled. “I never liked it when someone screamed at me.”

“What is taking so long?” Aki said when he was walking around impatiently. “It’s not that hard to knock someone out?”
“Perhaps someone got Lauri? And we are the only ones left.” Everybody looked at Eero who had said this. Aki smacked him on the back of his head “that’s not helping!”
“I guess it’s up to us now.. Who wants a ridiculously long sandwich?” everybody nodded and the guys sat after a few minutes without any worries enjoying their ridiculously sandwiches.

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Moet dat nou in het Engels?

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Heel mooi !!

Komt er nog een vervolg?

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het laaste gedeelte.

Part 10:

The guys were still waiting for Lauri to return. Aki looked on his watch “it’s taking long!”
“I need to go to the toilet” Pauli mumbled Aki smiled “go ahead!”
“No way I’m going!”
“Than hold it up!..”
“Fine! I hope everyone will remember my name when I’m gone!” Eero laughed, “We will all remember you Pauli, the one who eats ridiculously long sandwiches..” Aki had an evil grin on his face “we should call him the ‘Sandwich man!’ they all laughed except for Pauli who was a bit angry with them. The laughing stopped and there was another huge silence. Eero looked at the others “you know.. I actually have to go as well..” and now even Aki said: “yeah me too..”
“We could go all together.. Three persons are stronger than one..” they all agreed on that they looked for something what could protect them. Aki got his drumsticks, Eero an old guitar and Pauli.. A giant sandwich. Aki looked at the giant sandwich which was almost bigger than Pauli self. “That thing is huge.. Where did you get this?. And not to mention where did you hide it?” Pauli grinned, “It’s a secret!”
Now that they were armoured they went to the front of the bus looking for Lauri and the toilet. When they reached the front they saw the obsessed fan with an apple in her mouth sitting in a giant cooking pan and some dark figures with feathers on their heads and a Lauri with feathers and black stripes on his cheeks dancing around the cooking pan. Lauri noticed them and stopped dancing “hey guys!”
“What are you doing? And what’s with the feathers on your head and the black stripes on your cheeks?” Aki asked when he looked at Lauri. “These guys are the best, they have got some great idea’s.. They call themselves the nighthawks and we are pretending that we are Indians and we are going to cook our prey. Pauli looked at the obsessed fan “I never knew she was food..” Lauri shrugged “me neither” Aki was about to get the apple out of the girls mouth but Lauri stopped him “don’t! She will just shout and scream.. Very annoying and after being kidnapped for so long I’m not really in the mood for screaming fan girls!” Eero looked at the giant cooking pan “and still there is something what is wrong right now” Eero moved his broche on his sweater and with a high voice pretending it was the broche what was speaking he said: “that’s right! There is something wrong, where is the bread?” suddenly everybody looked at Pauli’s giant sandwich. Pauli shook his head “no way, you are not going to eat my giant sandwich!”
“But it’s for a good cause!”
“Good cause or not, this is mine! And mine means that it’s for me! And no one else!” Lauri mumbled “selfish brat” and turned to the others “fine! No soup for you!”
Pauli was angry now “I don’t even want your stinky soup, I’ve always hated your cooking anyway!”
“What!” Lauri was about to get him but some nighthawks grabbed him and pulled him back. The girl in the cooking pan moved a lot trying to get loose. Then suddenly got that apple out of her mouth and pulled her out of the pan. The girl looked at the man who had saved her and she looked at the face of the driver. The other were about to fight each other and were making a lot of sound, most of the words were swearwords! The driver raised his voice to a big scary echo kind of voice “be quiet!” everybody stopped talking and looked at the driver, which was standing next to the obsessed fan. Then the driver smiled “I see that we have got some guests, now ho are you?” the leader of the nighthawks stepped forward. “I’m the leader of the night hawks, that’s a group who is currently working for the STARS.” Everybody looked confused “We have come to save you from the obsessed fan” everybody cheered except for Lauri “why? Nothing has happened” Aki smacked him on the back of the head “we are being kidnapped remember!”
“O yeah.. I forgot!” the obsessed got the black box from her pocket, which was soaked by the soup. “Don’t ever forget that I’m in control or else I’ll blow up the bus!” one of the nighthawks stepped forward with a really sweat six years old girl. Pauli looked at the girl “where did she came from?” the girl stepped forward and looked with puppy eyes at the girl “misses.. Please let the Rasmus free, because I really like them.. And I wanted to see the big special concert.. And now I can’t because of you. This might be the last time I am able to see them because I’m very sick you know... They say that I’ll die soon and I just want to be happy.. They are my big idols like for many others.. I just wanted to see them one time on stage.. But now I can’t...” the little girl started crying and was about to walk away but the girl stopped her. The little girl turned around and looked with her watery puppy eyes into the girls eyes. The obsessed fan couldn’t stand it. “I’m sorry.. I don’t know what I was thinking!.. Off course they’ll come! You can die now!.. Happy I mean.. There will be one big concert for you!..”
“Thank you!” the girl hugged and then she walked away with the nighthawk who brought her to the fan. When they were out of sight the girl held up her head “that was easy, no give me what you’ve promised, my money and my sweats!”
“You have done a great job, so you have earned it!” the nighthawk handed over her award and then the girl walked away.

“Driver! With full speed to the concert!!” the driver saluted and was about to walk away but then Eero stopped him “I was thinking a bit and how is it possible that you are standing here and the bus is moving?” the driver smiled “auto pilot!” he walked away but when he was about to get out of sight he quickly said: “it’ll only take a day, better prepare yourself guys because a concert is waiting for you!” Aki was still in shock “that was so sweet...”

There was a lightning flash

When the guys and the obsessed fan were able to see something they noticed that the nighthawks were gone. Lauri looked around “Hey! They stole my feathers!! What do I have to put in my hair now?”
Aki grinned, “I’ve got an idea!”

“And now people, it’s what you have been waiting for. The special concert of the Rasmus” a lot of Rasmus fans cheered and they cheered even harder when the guys came up stage. First Eero with his Christmas decorated guitar, then Pauli with his guitar and the ridiculously long sandwich. Then Aki came up in his Santa Claus suit plus the beard and as last Lauri came up with a paper back on his head over his head. Aki walked to the microphone and started speaking. “Good day everyone! I’m Santa Claus.. No sorry, just Aki and this is our special concert. First of all I want to thank the nighthawks for saving us from the obsessed fan! Second I want to thank all of the fans in STARS and everyone who is here. And third I want to thank the obsessed fan for the great time though we were kidnapped and especially for the replacement of Lauri’s feathers..” he looked at Lauri “now please remove the bag Lauri” Lauri nodded “he is a bit shy!.. Guys?” Pauli held Lauri and Eero pulled the back off his head. Lauri now stood in the middle of the stage without the bag over his head. Lauri’s hair was died green and there were some branches of a Christmas tree in his hair together with some balls. There was a big silence in the hall but then some people whistled and some cheered and then soon everybody cheered and shouted again like there was nothing wrong. Lauri now smiled. “That’s right! .. I did something else for a change! And nighthawks! I want my feathers back!” then the concert began and it took hours. When it was over Lauri spoke again. “And we have got a little surprise for some Him and apocalyptica fans, here are some songs with Ville and apocalyptica! And they started to play the other songs.