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Hi! Ik ben een tijd geleden begonnen aan een Engels verhaal en ik wilde graag weten wat jullie zoal van mijn Engels en de manier waarop ik schrijf vinden. Het is niet een super volwassen stuk of iets dergelijks, zie maar wat je ervan vind. Alvast bedankt! :)

The warmth of the club welcomed me when I entered. My eyes were scanning the room looking for the familiar face of my redhead friend. It was crowded, too crowded for my likings. After a few minutes I found him, talking with a group of girls. Who were chuckling awkwardly at everything he said.
I made my way towards him, muttering some excuses every time I had to pass someone. “Ed.” His eyes shot in my direction when he heard his name. A smile formed on his lips recognizing my face. “Callum, finally you’re here.” He said while turning towards me. Bluntly ignoring the girls he had been talking to. “Yeah, sorry I took so long.” I straightened my jacket by pulling the hem then burying my hands in the pockets of my dark grey jeans.
“So how have you been?” He asked. I cocked my eyebrow. “You know how I have been, Ed. As bad as can be.” I sounded irritated but I couldn’t help myself. He knew all about my situation and he wasn’t getting me in a better mood by asking for it once again. “Oh come on, Cal. Lighten up a bit. It’s been a month ago. I know it’s hard but you got to get on with your life.” “I’ll decide that for myself, thank you.” I snorted and got even more agitated by the several people that bumped into me. Ed sighed and a silence fell. “Look, I’m just going to go home.” I said, already regretting coming here in the first place, and just as Ed wanted to stop me a voice caught our attention.
“Ed! Where have you been? I’ve been looking everywhere for you!” It was a girl that had been calling Ed’s name. She appeared next to him. “I’m sorry, got caught up with some girls.” She smiled at him. “Don’t worry about it, I’ve entertained myself.”
After that her eyes fell upon me. She surveyed me for a couple seconds. “You must be Callum! Ed's told me all about you.” Where her words. She shot her hand out to me, I took it and shook it. “I’m Danni. Nice to meet you.” “Likewise.” I gave her a crooked smile, now surveying her.

From that moment on she had, had me. She was mesmerizing and something about her didn’t let me go. She gave me the same crooked smile I had given her and turned to Ed when he started talking once again. “Let me get you two a drink.” He said and he left us.
I had already forgotten about the fact that I had wanted to leave this club a few minutes ago. The girl that was standing in front of me had gotten my interest. It wasn’t until she said something that I found out I had been staring at her intensely.
“Oh my god! I love this song. Come on, let’s dance!” Were her enthusiastic words. I chuckled and shook my head. “I’m afraid I can’t dance.” Sure I could do some simple idiotic dances but those were the ones I saved for drunk nights with friends. Just moving on the rhythm of the music made me feel stupid and I didn’t want to make a fool out of myself in front of this girl.
Apparently she didn’t feel the need to listen to my words an grabbed my wrist, pulling me towards the dance floor. She stopped when she decided that she found a good spot. “Anyone can dance, Callum.” She said with a smile, already moving her hips on the beat of the music.
Not long after, she closed her eyes surrendering herself to the music. She made it look easy and soon I started to do the same. A small giggle left her lips when she opened her eyes and looked at my moves. I stopped and shot her an embarrassed look.
“I’m sorry.” She apologized, not trying to hold back the smile that was still on her face.
“I told you I couldn’t dance.” “You actually moved quite well. You just looked a little awkward.” “Yeah, right. That’s why you just laughed at me.” I said. She just looked at me with innocent eyes, which made me laugh.