[GED] Verschillende gedichten
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[GED] Verschillende gedichten
Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 11-08-13 12:44
Veel leesplezier!;D
Nummer 1.
When I paint a colored flower
On my black wall of death
I screamed your name as a gift
And I paint over it.
Your heart is next to my bed
And your brain is in the closet
Your name is on my mind
Your body is in mine.
My creations on the floor
And everytime again
I screamed so loud as I could
I have loved you more.
When my body went tired
Of fighting with myself
I created a little imagination
Dreams, to get out.
Now your body’s on my wall
My black wall of death
Your heart is red and beating
With a little flower in it.
nummer 2
Trough my broken back window.
The boy I’ve see everyday.
Is living in front of my worn house.
Living in a castle surrounded by flowers.
His garden is big enough for ten.
But he’s sitting there alone.
And everyday again.
He’s praying to the moon.
The stars he’s always counting.
And everytime I try to read his lips.
It seems like he tries to explain.
The love he can’t give.
When he falls asleep tonight.
I’m sitting there alone.
Praying to my god.
If he can bring him home.
And trough my broken back window.
The boy I’ve actually see everyday.
Is standing in his garden.
And takes his breath away.
nummer 3
I’m putting on my shoes and i’ll go for a walk.
On the corner of the street I’ll met a boy who’s never talk.
My smile is growing and my legs go slower.
His eyes are shy and his smile is broken.
My steps came closer and my mind says no.
My mouth keeps closed and my heart beats slow.
He pressed himself against the wall.
Waiting for words that always fall.
I’ll bow my head and walked on by.
A softly sigh I heard from behind.
I’ll turn my face with my eyes half open.
I’ve never seen anyone so broken.
I walk home and opened my door.
My mind is by the boy who’s living on the floor.
Who’s pick up pieces and stick it to each other.
He doesn’t want to be a bother.
I’ll close my eyes and see myself.
I’m not much better than anyone, than him.
Thinking about the boy on the corner who’s wanting to be new.
Searching for a life and for his imaginary girl.
Bedankt voor het lezen(:
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Re: [GED] Verschillende gedichten
Geplaatst: 13-08-13 18:43
Erg mooie gedichten, super!
Ik heb er niet veel verstand van, en reageer dan ook nooit op zulke soortgelijke topics, maar deze gedichten vind ik echt heel mooi!
Ga zo door.
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Geplaatst door de TopicStarter : 14-08-13 13:45
licorne schreef:Je engels rammelt veel teveel om echt onder de indruk te zijn, al vind ik de manier waarop je dingen probeert te zeggen wel de basis van een mooie stijl, zeker qua beeldspraak. Maar voor het correct engels is vraagt dit nog wel echt wat eindredactie!
Bedankt voor je reactie (:
Engels is en blijft moeilijk haha
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