You're slowly taking over me.

You are messing with my head,
I Wonder where I went wrong.
Because somewhere I lost control,
I keep on wondering, but must go on.

You give me restless nights,
I lie awake and think about you.
Your face keeps haunting me,
Baby, I don't know what to do.

Your whispering keeps resounding,
You are still stuck on my mind.
And I will try to find the answers,
And I won't stop till I find.

I wanna run away and hide,
I don't want love, I long to be free.
But your face keeps on haunting,
You're slowly taking over me..

Ik ben opzoek naar commentaar, zowel over mijn grammaticale kunsten als over het rijmen zelf. Suggesties voor verbeteringen zijn ook zeker welkom, daar kan ik immers alleen maar van leren.