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Britt_Sisi schreef:

Mooi gemaakt alweer!
Ik vind dat je mooie gedichten maakt, zelf ben ik niet zo goed in dichten dus tips kan ik je niet geven sorry!

Bokkiej schreef:

hier dna maar een ander engels gedicht. hopelijk wat corecter engels dan vorige

It feels like I'm drowning,
Feels like I'm drowning without you,
Now I know the feeling,
ofTo drowning without you,
I feel the pain is getting worser,
Worser than it did before,

It feels like I'm falling,
Feels like I'm falling down without you,
I didn't feld the feeling,
To falling without you,
I feel the pain is getting much worser,
Much worser than it did before,

I try to fall asleep,
But I can't sleep without you,
I feld this feeling before,
To fall in sleep and never come back,
Its all tearing me apart,
I'm feeling much worser,
Much worser than before,

graag tips gevraagd

sannetjeb schreef:

Ik heb ook wat veranderd

Heel mooi gedicht trouwens!!

It feels like I'm drowning,
Feels like I'm drowning without you,
Now I know the feeling,
To be drowning without you,
I feel te pain is getting worser,
Worser dan it did before,

It feels like I'm falling,
Feels like I'm falling down without you,
I did'nt feld/felt the feeling,
To falling whithout you,
I feel (that) the pain is getting much worser,
Much worse than it did before,

I try to falling/fall a sleep(asleep),
But I can't sleep without you,
I feld/felt this feeling before,
To fall sleep/a sleep and never come back,
Its all terring me appart,
I'm feeling much worse,
Much worse(r) than before,


Zo Ik hoop dat ik nu geen foutjes heb gemaakt

Saroosh_S schreef:

sannetjeb schreef:

Ik heb ook wat veranderd

Heel mooi gedicht trouwens!!

It feels like I'm drowning,
Feels like I'm drowning without you,
Now I know the feeling,
To be drowning without you,
I feel the pain is getting worse,
Even worse than it did before,

It feels like I'm falling,
Feels like I'm falling down without you,
I didn't feel the feeling,
To be falling without you,
I feel the pain is getting much worse,
Much worse than it did before,

I try to fall asleep
But I can't sleep without you,
I felt this feeling before,
To fall asleep and never come back,
It's all tearing me apart,
I'm feeling much worse,
Much worse than before,

Bokkiej schreef:

Bedankt. ik ben niet zo goed in engels kan beter maar gewoon weer nederlands gaan schrijven