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Mariska15 schreef:Hallo!!!!!!
ik heb morgen mijn engelse mondeling, en ik ben niet zo goed in engels zou iemand voor mij deze lijst willen kopieren en dan fouten eruit halen enzo.... ALSJEBLIEFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
en dan terug sturen naar mij via pb of in het topic ofzo, please help me if you can.
Dit is hem:
I am going to tell you something about horses. Because I own a horse, I know a lot about it.
I want to tell specificly about riding dressage contests. Thats one of the things people can do with the animals. You have(There are) different directions (diciplines) namely(sutch as); dressage, jumping, eventing.
Me and my horse.
I am a proud owner of a horse. It is an(a) mare and she is brown(bay). Her name is Leetee, and she is 8 (y)jears old. I own her now for let(')s say a (y)jear and a half. Her stable is next to my house and, thats why I can look after my horse, brush and ride her every day(?). Because I train my riding with her every day, it goes very well, I train 2 days a week by my tutor for the dressage. And one day in the week I go with my horse to jumpinglessons by an other trainer, to get there we must load her uppon(?) in the trailer.(geen upon)
And(geen and) in the weekends( On Saturdays and sundays) I always try to ride(enter in) a dressage-competition with her. Since a month we are in(allowed to start at) a new(higher) level, that is way(very; more) difficult.
But before you can go on(start in) competitions (zonder s)you need to(have learned) know quit a lot of things(of the basic principles of dressage). Before you can ride your trial(match), you must be alert(aware) of (lots of) different things. (Zin klopt echt niet)
If you drive with you’re car and trailer upon someone elses groundproperty, you must be polite. (If you ride with your trailer on someone elses proporty you must follow their rules)
The first thing to do is to go to the jury and take care of the financial bussiness (pay your entry fee). While they settle the built(bill) you have got to fil(fill) in a coupon. And(geen and) after that you go back to your car and trailer and naturally your horse. You can take your horse out of the trailer and then saddle it. Before you saddle your horse it must be strictly following the orders been brusht (?)(Before I saddle her up she must be all brushed and shining). The clothes that you were are also following the rules.(the clothing is worn following strickt rules) Of (The clothing witch is worn on a dressage competition is worn according to strickt regulations)
After this all you can ride at(on) your horse (If everything is approved by my mother, at last i can mount my horse) , and after about half a hour (in witch i do the warming-up), you can ride with your horse to the jury and their(there) you must ride a trial for marks so you get calculate (judged) for the trial.
After you have driving(drivven) your first trial you must ride again by(before) an other jury, and their(there) you will be calculated(judged) again. And after those two trials, you can unsaddle(desaddle) your horse. And I always take a walk over the terrain with my horse(to cool her down) and then she can eat hay and carrots. Then I load her back in(on) the trailer again and then I go to the distibution of prizes(and then i go to the jury to collect my protocol), and leave her with her hay-bag in the trailer. Then I hope that I have won a prize, and if thats the situation(is a fact) of (has happened) I am very happy(pleased), and give my horse a very big hug(and if i have lost i kick her). And(geen and aan het begin van een zin) if you win you usually get some blankets(cover) of (stable rug)for your horse or something like that.
The riding itself: If you ride at(geen at) your horse, you can send(lead) him with your bridles to the left and(or) the right, but you can alsoo(also) let(make) him go faster and slower with it. Your legs are very important with the riding and guiding. Most probably(zeer waarschijnlijk?) they are more important then the sending(leading) with the bridles(briddles). With you’re legs you can do very much, you can let the horse dance instead of walking(walk) and guide her and change the speed and a lot of things more.
I always ride with a helmet(dressage-cap) of (safetycap) because if I have got(geen got) jump(jumpinglessons) lessons I fall of very often and its(it's) safer to wear those things.(als je er steeds vanaf plettert wel ja)
I have al soo(I've also) brought(with me) a picture of my horse were(where) we are at a contest, you can see at the picture the obligation of the clothes.
Groetjes... en niet lachen he als er heel veel fouten inzitten he.
Mariska15 schreef:I am going to
('I would like to') tell you something about horses. Because I own a horse, I know (quite)a lot about it.
I want to tell (you something)specificly about riding dressage contests. (een Brit zou zeggen "I want to tell you something about dressage contests in particular")Thats one of the things people can do with the animals. You have different directions (when you want to compete with your horse,) namely; dressage, jumping, eventing.
Me and my horse. 'My horse and Me' (jij moet altijd achteraan, is een beleefdheidsregel)
I am a proud owner of a horse. It is an (a) mare and she is brown. (brown mare) Her name is Leetee, and she is 8 jears old. I own her now ('I have owned her') for lets say ('about') a jear and a half. Her stable is next to my house and, thats why I can look after my horse ('her', je hebt het al over je paard, hoef je niet nog een keer te zeggen), brush and ride her every day. (prima zin, je can dat 'brush' wel weglaten, dat hoort bij 'looking after her')
Because I ('ride her') train my riding with her every day, it goes very well, I train 2 days a week by my tutor ('Instructor') for the dressage. And one day in the week I go with my horse to jumpinglessons by an other trainer, to get there we must load her uppon(?) in the trailer. (Ik zou zeggen "To get there we have to go by trailer")
And in the weekends I always try to ride a competition dressage (dressage competition)with her. Since a month ("Since last month") we are in a new level, that is way difficult. ("we are in a higher level, which is more difficult")
But before you can go on competitions you need to know quit a lot of things. Before you can ride your trial (een te letterlijke vertaling van 'proef' - in her engels is het een 'test') , you must be alert of ('alert on' maar ik zou liever zeggen 'aware of') different things.
If you drive with you’re car and trailer upon someone elses property, you must be polite.
The first thing to do is to go to the jury and take care of the financial bussiness. While they settle the built (? Bedoel je 'settle de bill', de rekening? Built is bouwen..) you have got to fil in a coupon. And after that you go back to your car and trailer and naturally your horse. You can take your horse out of the trailer and then saddle it. Before you saddle your horse it must be strictly following the orders been brushed (?). The clothes that you were (wear) are also following the rules.
After this all you can ride at ('at' weglaten; 'ride your horse' is goed) your horse, and after about half a hour, you can ride with your horse to the jury and their you must ride a trial ('test') for marks so you get calculate for the trial. (rare zin; ik zou zeggen "so that they can add the marks and calculate how well you did")
After you have driving (paardrijden is 'riding' niet 'driving', maar je kan beter gewoon zeggen "after your first test") your first trial you must ride again by an other jury, and their (there) you will be calculated (door word je weer opgetelt? Ik zou zeggen "there you will be judged again") again. And after those two trials, you can unsaddle your horse. And I always take a walk over the terrain with my horse and then she can eat hay and carrots. Then I load ('put') her back in the trailer again ('again' weglaten, dubbel met 'back') and then I go to the distibution of prizes, and leave her with her hay-bag in the trailer. Then I hope that I have won a prize, and if thats the situation I am very happy, and give my horse a very big hug. And if you win you usually get some blankets for your horse or something like that. (is niet helemaal duidelijk dat dat dan een prijs is. Ik zou zeggen "you usually get a beautiful blanket for your horse". 'some blankets' klinkt alsof je een stapeltje ouwe dekens krijgt )
The riding itself: If you ride at your horse, you can send (niet 'send' maar 'steer' of 'direct') him with your bridles ('reins'. bridle is het hoofdstel, reins zijn de teugels) to the left and the right, but you can alsoo let him go faster and slower with it. Your legs are very important with the riding and guiding. Most probably they are more important ('they are probably more importnat' klinkt makkelijker) then the sending with the bridles. ('than using the reins') With you’re legs you can do very much, you can let the horse dance instead of walking and guide her and change the speed and a lot of things more.
I always ride with a helmet because if I have got jump lessons I fall of very often and its safer to wear those things.
I have al soo brought a picture of my horse were we are at a contest, you can see at the picture the obligation of the clothes.
Pellie schreef:jeetje dat jullie hier tijd in steken zeg? en ik heb even gekeken maar ik vond het een te lang stuk om te verbeteren.
krijg je cijfer op het ingeleverde stuk? zo ja, leer je hier dus niks van en is je cijfer straks erg onterecht.
Mariska15"]
[quote="Pellie schreef:jeetje dat jullie hier tijd in steken zeg? en ik heb even gekeken maar ik vond het een te lang stuk om te verbeteren.
krijg je cijfer op het ingeleverde stuk? zo ja, leer je hier dus niks van en is je cijfer straks erg onterecht.
Pellie"]
[quote="Mariska15"][quote="Pellie schreef:jeetje dat jullie hier tijd in steken zeg? en ik heb even gekeken maar ik vond het een te lang stuk om te verbeteren.
krijg je cijfer op het ingeleverde stuk? zo ja, leer je hier dus niks van en is je cijfer straks erg onterecht.